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Interview with Michael Ventrella (Editor of “Tales of Fortannis: A Bard’s Eye View”)

Wednesday, May 18th, 2011

Arch Enemies

The Axes of Evil

A Bard’s Eye View

Michael Ventrella

I’d like to extend a warm welcome to author and editor, Michael Ventrella.  One of my short stories, “Grip of Chaos” appears in his new anthology -  Tales of Fortannis: A Bard’s Eye View (Double Dragon Publishing, 2011).

I first met Michael at RavenCon in Richmond, Virginia, and have had the pleasure of serving with him on more than one science fiction/fantasy panel.

Michael, would you please introduce yourself.

Hi, everybody!  I’m Michael A. Ventrella.  My web page is http://www.michaelventrella.com and you can find me on Facebook, Twitter, and other social media fairly easily.  I have two fantasy novels published so far that take place in the world of Fortannis – a magical place full of danger and excitement.

ARCH ENEMIES involves a prophecy which states that the Chosen One will seal the magical Arch to prevent the evil gryphons sealed within from being released.  The problem is that instead of getting the Chosen One, they get young bard Terin Ostler (who they think is the Chosen One!).  Terin has no idea what to do, can’t cast a spell to save his life (literally) and drops heavy swords whenever he gets one.

Terin is just a normal guy.  He has no special powers or abilities.  Instead of winning by using the Force or super powers or beating the bad guy with a sword until he dies, Terin wins by being clever and figuring out complicated ways to solve the problem.

In the sequel THE AXES OF EVIL, everyone is now convinced that Terin really is the one from the prophecy.  Now everyone comes to him with their prophecies, expecting him to solve them.  He’s faced with three contradicting ones, as well as an impossible order from his Duke.  Of course, he finds a way to solve all of the problems, being the clever lad he is.

The new anthology is called TALES OF FORTANNIS: A BARD’S EYE VIEW.  It takes place in the lands of the novels, but with many writers contributing, you can get a different feel for the world.  My novels, for instance, are young adult oriented with a bit of humor.  Some of the stories in this collection definitely are not!

It has just been released in the ebook format (as of this writing) and the paperback and kindle versions should be available within a few weeks.

Tell us a little about the world of Fortannis and the types of intelligent beings who live there.

In some ways, it is the kind of fantasy world readers are used to:  There are dwarves and elves and orcs and so on.  But there are a few things that make it different.

First, there is the complicated race of beings known as the biata.  They are descended from gryphons, which are intelligent and have the power to change their form and walk among the populace disguised as biata.  Therefore, you never quite know whether any biata you meet may secretly be a powerful gryphon in disguise.

Gryphons and biata also have mental abilities – they can go into your mind and plant false memories or otherwise control you.  This is a major plot point in ARCH ENEMIES, as a war with a country run by biata and gryphon is fraught with danger—the fellow on the battlefield next to you could be enslaved to them without you even knowing it.

Mind you, to make it even more confusing, they are a race like any other, meaning there are biata who are good and honest and loyal to the crown and there are those who belong to the enemy army.  You can’t just look at one and tell.

Secondly, there is no religion in this world.  No gods will come down and save your ass, no clerics are fighting among themselves, and no one gets worshipped.  You’re responsible for your own failures and successes.

Third, although it (like most high fantasy) is based on a traditional medieval society, Fortannis isn’t a male-dominated world.

What made you decide to edit an anthology of stories set in the world of Fortannis?

In all honesty, I thought it would be a great way to get another book out quicker than I normally would as well as entice readers to try out my novels.  Plus I wanted to see what others would make of the world.

Did you have any second thoughts about other people writing about your world?

 No, not really, although I did have to reject some stories that were so far out there they wouldn’t fit and I also had to correct some authors who strayed too far from the world as it has already been established.

Did you receive the types of stories you expected to receive?

I received way too many stories that read like the kind of thing a role-playing game player would write about their character history.  You know, the “how my character became an adventurer” thing.  I didn’t accept any of them.

But of the ones that were accepted, I was fairly pleased and in some cases, quite surprised.

I found writing for “A Bard’s Eye View” a challenge.  At the beginning, I didn’t know any of the rules for that story world.  What were your biggest challenges when editing the collection?

Saying no to friends who had submitted stories that were not accepted!

There were a few stories as well that were from beginning writers that needed quite a bit of rewriting.  I sent a few back with suggestions, and most were returned vastly improved.  A few were still rejected even after the changes.

You mentioned that you might put together a second Fortannis anthology.  What recommendations do you have for writers who wish to submit stories for your consideration?

It would probably help if you read my novels, especially the first (ARCH ENEMIES) which establishes the world.

Other than that, try to break away from the clichés.  Don’t think: “Oh, it’s a fantasy novel, so I need to have heroes with swords fighting monsters.”  The setting is a fantasy world, but there are as many different stories that can be told in that world as there are in our world.

One of the stories in this collection, for instance, is about a hobling (a hobbit-like being—don’t want to get sued here) who is trying to steal a recipe for a pie he likes.  Another is about a fellow who is trying to pull a scam on the Duke of Ashbury.  A third is about some goblin children spying on the humans to figure out what they are doing in a mysterious cave.

While I like a good adventure (and, I should add, my story in the collection falls more into the “adventure” category), I’d like more stories about life in general in this world for the next collection.

I am accepting stories now for the next edition. See my web page at www.michaelaventrella.com/fortannis.php for details.

Well, thank you Michael for stopping by and for all the great information.  Best of luck in your literary endeavors.  For those who are interested, the link to the Double Dragon website is as follows:  http://www.double-dragon-ebooks.com/single.php?ISBN=1-55404-831-1 .  To purchase Tales of Fortannis: A Bard’s Eye View on Amazon, go to http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/155404832X.

Warm wishes to all,

Laurel Anne Hill  (Author of “Heroes Arise”), http://www.laurelannehill.com

 

Breathing Life into your Writing (RavenCon 2010, April 11) Presented by Laurel Anne Hill

Monday, March 29th, 2010

2010, 9:38 pm

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Breathing Life into Your Writing (April 11, 10am – Noon, RavenCon)

A Workshop Presented by Laurel Anne Hill, with the assistance of Nancy Holzner, Barbara Friend Ish & Allen Wold

A. Make Characters Come Alive on the Page: Stay Close to Point-of-View Characters

1. Create authentic and believable characters.  Keep thoughts and actions consistent with who they are and the situation.

2. Back story should arise because the point of view character has a reason to recall the information.  Organize back story to reflect the way people think.

3. Create realistic dialogue.  Avoid unrealistic information dumps in dialogue.

4. Avoid “talking heads.”  Let point-of-view characters react to words and actions of others through thoughts and words.

5. Use the five senses.

6. Stay in the culture

B. The Story Structure and Forward Momentum

1. Story arc, forward momentum and breathing space.

2. The contract with the reader.

a.) Where should your story start and end?

(1) Visiting a “new world”

(2)The question

(3) Character

(4) “World” out-of-order

b.)The end informs the beginning.

3. The opening promise and editing your story line

4. Employ strong verbs but “was-zies” have their place.

5. Minimize use of adverbs,” it,” and “that.”

C. Writing Exercise and Feedback:  Participants are encouraged to bring several pages of a work in progress.

Hope to see you there,

Laurel Anne Hill (Author of “Heroes Arise”) http://www.laurelannehill.com


RavenCon 2010: Schedule for Laurel Anne Hill (Author of "Heroes Arise")

Tuesday, March 23rd, 2010

Laurel Anne Hill’s Schedule for RavenCon 2010 at the Holiday Inn Koger Center in Richmond, VA, April 9-11, is as follows:

  

Friday, April 9

4 pm, Room E, Kill Them All-And Let the Reader Sort Them Out  How does one resolve the issues of the not so happy ending? Many times the kill them all kind of ending is not a big winner with readers or movie goers. Yet to not do so, may change the intent of the writer. Do writers have to knuckle under and change the endings or are they brave enough to let it all happen the way they see it?

Valerie Griswold-Ford, Laurel Anne Hill, Stuart Jaffe, Lee Martindale

 

11 pm, Cove, The Changing Face, Body, Language, Imagery…etc. of Feminism in SF and Fantasy  Feminism has been introduced in literature in various ways. But as with everything, time mandates that in order to keep the interest of the audience, some things have to change. Or do they? Are there ways in which feminism can displayed without the “in your face” use of the stereotypical woman who can kick every alien’s ass and yet still be womanly?

Gregory Eatroff, Laurel Anne Hill, Nancy Holzner, Laura Underwood

 

Saturday, April 10

10 am, Dealers, Signing,  Laurel Anne Hill

 

4 pm, Anna, Putting the Adult in Young Adult Stories

How do you decide when too much is well…too much? How is a successful story created that satisfies the wants and desires of more than just one market while not going overboard in the process?

Mike Allen, Rachael Caine, Laurel Anne Hill, Amy Sturgis

 

9 pm, Anna, And Then Buffy Met Edward: The End

There are vampires and well there are vampires. Is there a form of discrimination against the too “soft” types or is that the new norm? Has society become vampire friendly or are we being led astray by political and societal correctness? Do vampires have to sparkle in order to be successful?

Catherine Asaro, Rachael Caine, Chris Flick, Laurel Anne Hill

 

Sunday, April 11

10 am, New River, “Breathing Life into you Writing” Workshop

A two-hour workshop that focuses on staying close to the point-of-view of characters and revealing the story world through their five senses, thereby creating authentic, believable characters. Discussion also about story structure, believable dialogue, creating forward momentum and strong/weak verb usage.  

Led by Laurel Anne Hill, with the assistance of Nancy Holzner, Barbara Ish and Allen Wold.

 

2 pm, Anna, Rapid Fire Reading Given by Members of Broad Universe

 

And watch for the launch of Rum and Runestones: Magical Tales of Piracy (Dragon Moon Press, 2010), Edited by Valerie Griswold-Ford.  Laurel’s short story, “Thar Be Magic” will appear in this anthology.  Visit the Laurel Anne Hill website at http://www.laurelannehill.com.

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Interview of Laurel Anne Hill by Lady Ozma at RavenCon, Podcast on 4/16/09

Wednesday, May 13th, 2009

Lady Ozma interviewed me at RavenCon in 2008 and podcast the session last month.  She did a fantastic job of putting the broadcast together.

Go to the following link, scroll down to the bottom of the entry for April 16, 2009 and click on "Quoth_The_Raven_Episode_1.mp3."  And be sure to leave a comment for her.

http://quoththeraven.libsyn.com/

Thanks,

Laurel Anne Hill (Author of Heroes Arise)

http://www.laurelannehill.com

 

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